I was really enjoying this for about ¾ of it and then hit a wall for reasons I can’t quite articulate, sort of like the point in a Phase 4 Marvel movie when you realise there’s still a whole hour to go.
Right? I think having a big showdown at the 3/4 mark was a mistake -- even if it wasn't the main plot thread, it still felt climactic, and it made me less engaged with the romance plot. (... *eyes own WIP* Oh dear. ;-p)
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Date: 2022-12-17 09:42 pm (UTC)Right? I think having a big showdown at the 3/4 mark was a mistake -- even if it wasn't the main plot thread, it still felt climactic, and it made me less engaged with the romance plot. (... *eyes own WIP* Oh dear. ;-p)